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Inside The Glass by ~Angsty-Poet:iconAngsty-Poet:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


I avoid all of the mirrors in the house
too scared to be eye to eye
with that worthless bitch in the glass
too scared to look her in the eye
and see how much she looks like me
I wonder if that worthless bitch
is scared to see me too
if she is too ashamed to say
she looks so much like me
if she is...
I would not blame her
I wonder if that worthless bitch wants to kill me
I wonder if she imagines the feeling of wrapping her hands around my throat
and choking me
I'm not afraid to admit it
I feel that way too
and I wonder if that worthless bitch inside of that reflecting glass
is worth so much more
than the one standing on the outside complaining
but never making any effort to change
©2006-2009 ~Angsty-Poet
:iconangsty-poet:

Author's Comments

This one is most definately going to the scraps in a little while. I liked the ending but it was sort of a thing I wrote when I was angry with myself and so I didn't have the smooth kind of concentration inside of it that I would have liked. Don't worry though, there will be a better quality poem being posted later today hopefully :nod: Just wanted to share this with you before it went to scraps :)

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~commonshade22 Oct 20, 2006, 6:56:05 AM
i like it though :)
i sometimes feel this way...

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***Just another long day of my woefully short life***
:iconangsty-poet:
~Angsty-Poet Oct 20, 2006, 7:48:30 AM
Thank you :)

I feel this way a lot lately *sigh* it kind of sucks because this poem is so much the truth :hug: but please don't feel that way because you are a wonderful person...you're sweet and kind :hug:

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You broke me: I should have known it when I saw your eyes were blue. Eyes as cold as ice. Eyes as cold as you.

-Wendy AKA Charllie-
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~Angsty-Poet Oct 20, 2006, 7:54:51 AM
thanks for the hug I really could use some right now :)

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You broke me: I should have known it when I saw your eyes were blue. Eyes as cold as ice. Eyes as cold as you.

-Wendy AKA Charllie-
:iconangsty-poet:
~Angsty-Poet Oct 20, 2006, 8:31:54 AM
Awww thank you hun :hug: I love you too :P

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You broke me: I should have known it when I saw your eyes were blue. Eyes as cold as ice. Eyes as cold as you.

-Wendy AKA Charllie-
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*DrowningByWords Oct 20, 2006, 10:09:35 AM
a powerful message and imagery
I think you shouldn't scrap it
maybe add a little more too it
but its such a personal and powerful poem
that you should keep it in your gallery

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Music Is True Love:love:You have never been in love/Until you've seen the stars/Reflect in the reservoirs:love:Book Lovers Of The World Unite!
:iconcommonshade22:
~commonshade22 Oct 20, 2006, 3:37:33 PM
lol sweet and kind...
i'll let you go on thinking that if it makes you happy ;)

you're welcome :)

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***Just another long day of my woefully short life***
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~mikey-madness Oct 20, 2006, 5:17:23 PM
I think a lot of people can relate to this one. I like it a lot actually one of your better pieces.

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Look my gallery, leave a few words. I won't mind. I swear! :D :P :)
:daprints: available!
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“Every artist dips his brush in his own soul, and paints his own nature into his pictures.” -- Henry Ward Beecher
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